This presentation is gorgeous, but the logo itself is poorly designed. It doesn't represent the company, a trading and management firm, in any way — what is this shape? What does it reflect to the nature of Franas MPH? Further, if you removed its stylized effects, this logo would lose its value entirely. It would no longer be recognizable, but rather an asymmetrical polygon that no one would associate with the company. As far as cost efficiency goes, could this be printed on mugs? Large posters? Shirts? No. Its gradients would lose quality in the printing process and once again no longer be recognizable.
While your Photoshop skill is clearly unparalleled, in my opinion you need to work on your design process and logic.
While your Photoshop skill is clearly unparalleled, in my opinion you need to work on your design process and logic.